tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108902282183852277.post3955587429143982234..comments2023-04-16T06:15:57.683-05:00Comments on The Writing Spectacle: Next!Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108902282183852277.post-70366719882528507632009-02-23T21:10:00.000-06:002009-02-23T21:10:00.000-06:00Yay! Thank you so much for all your help. =o) T...Yay! Thank you so much for all your help. =o) There's a little romance, but not enough to be key to the main story. I'll talk more about that tomorrow, maybe.B.E. Sandersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04336115135400388268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108902282183852277.post-85004732902050036602009-02-23T20:16:00.000-06:002009-02-23T20:16:00.000-06:00You don't need the "be" in the third line. Is ther...You don't need the "be" in the third line. Is there any romance in this? Because if so, that's not hinted at in the slightest.<BR/><BR/>Otherwise, yes, I think it's much better.Kristen Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07984459504977637298noreply@blogger.com