I've taken a hit and she's taking on water, but I think if I can just get her into port, I can fix her.
Which is to say: If I can write THE END on this sucker, I can fix the problems and the book will sail again.
I thought about this on and off throughout the day, made some cogent notes on where the errors were, and I think even with the fresh holes I discovered last night, I can still make this premise work. The real damage is in the sub-plots anyway, so she still floats.
Now, for the 'damn the torpedoes' part. I can't let a few holes stop me. Arr, there's writing to be done*. Let's see how close I can get to shore tonight.
*I probably could've pulled the pirate thing off better when I still had me eye patch. Arr.
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