A foundling raised in a state home, Mary Jones should be a meek servant under the Union’s dictatorship. Instead, she has a tendency to wander where she shouldn’t be, and this time it’s straight into a forbidden store run by a member of a secret society—The Order and they need help. Before she can blink, they decide she’s perfect for a mission they’ve planned for decades. Now, she can either stay home where the Union Guard already has orders to kill her, or she can escape the city to search for traces of mankind outside.
If she survives long enough to return, that is.
Beyond the ravages of a long-forgotten war, she learns freeing her city means eradicating the Union—by herself, if necessary. The problem is: when she promised to free her people, she never dreamed they wouldn’t want her help.
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(BTW, I don't really space between paragraphs - that's a no-no - I just can't get the blog to indent text without becoming a huge pain in the hiney.)
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2 comments:
You don't need the "be" in the third line. Is there any romance in this? Because if so, that's not hinted at in the slightest.
Otherwise, yes, I think it's much better.
Yay! Thank you so much for all your help. =o) There's a little romance, but not enough to be key to the main story. I'll talk more about that tomorrow, maybe.
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