Take time to deliberate, but when the time for action has arrived, stop thinking and go in.
- Napoleon

Sunday, August 17, 2008

Character Problems

Rewriting this sucker has been like pulling teeth. I don't think I've had this hard a time yet with anything I've edited.

On the bright side, I think I hit on what was killing me on this. I hadn't found what was making my MC tick. His voice wasn't ringing true for me. Well, I think I hit it tonight. Might have to go back over the first couple bits again to make sure everything is consistent, but it shouldn't be a problem.

Heh. Thought you could get away from me, eh Dennis? Well, I'll show you. Bwa ha ha. Another character falls under the writer's spell.



Travis Erwin said...

Good for you. Hope it continues to click now.

Kristen Painter said...

Isn't it fab when you figure something like that out? I just love that.